Blog #16

During a conference last week, Dr. Chandler and I went over how the short analysis projects are going to be graded, and when I started "grading" my own paper, I found a lot of points that were lacking and it was really helpful that we did that because along with smaller mistakes like forgetting to mention a few things in the introduction that I mentioned during the body of the paper, I realized that I should also make my research question clearer and more visible, plus I could add a chart that will further emphasize my points. I think the visual aid will help a lot with my conclusion in wrapping up my findings into a nice, neat image. I am also going to work on my conclusion to make it stronger.